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  Nov-7 4:03 pm

This week I bought a build a bear, which is a store that you pick out a stuffed animal have it stuffed yourself and you can even pick out clothes for it, you get to name the animal and get a birth certicate for it. 

Anyways my idea was to describe a stuffed animal but you can't us the species in your passage only describe it. 

 

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It was wet. A very unhappy object shook its feathers made a strange noise and gobbled the bread before taking off with the next gust of wind. Another twenty squawking hungry friends descended on the lawn and pecked at the remainder of the loaf and they also took off back out to sea.

Ancarra

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