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Baby's got which kind of eyes ?

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  Oct-28 5:10 pm

I'm tired tonight, it must be time to go to sleep.

In my dreams I hope to find you back at your place Ellie.

So that it could be possible for me and all others to work in English.

It would be so great to read you word again.

How horrible it is to injured you.

How coward is the one who dare breaking your heart.

I hope there's always some place to sleep and dream about your lovely eyes.

Tell me if they are blue or green ?

 

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  Nov-1 6:21 pm

My dear friend Fred, I sense that you are unhappy?

I do so hope that in your dreams all your questions Will be answered.

Be prepared my friend, to find that her eyes may be coloured, neither green, nor blue.

 

 

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Anxiety is mine you are right my friend. But you are next to me.

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Ahh, Fred, very sad.
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  Nov-15 8:08 am


Hey FRED--
good to read you again. not a happy poem, but clear and the emotion of it, right to the core.

hope you are feeling better- and not drowning.

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