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  Nov-2 2:20 pm

Forgot the c/p in the header.

A Fresh Breath

It was at first, just a simple thing
a brief meeting, a quick handshake,
a moment of consideration expressed.
It quickly escalated, transcended
barriers, grew into a forlorn fantasy
come to life. He intrigued me
like no others before him.
His faultless face morphed
before my psychosomatic eyes
into a paranormal being
whose sole purpose
was to haunt my lonely soul;
infest my degraded mind;
to bear witness
to the metamorphosis
that his very existence, a fact
not fiction, forced into being.
An uncomplicated wish;
suppressed, denied,
yet not forgotten,
catapulted from the depths
of my tortured heart,
merged with the memory of him
to gasp for breath again.



Edited 11/2/2009 3:03 pm ET by racierae
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  Nov-2 8:53 pm

Damn, I'm not touching this Rae -- you're in love!

 

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  Nov-2 11:08 pm

Ahhh... come on, lol. It is a love poem, or my version of one, I was asked to write one, I found it difficult to do, actually very difficult. Love...hmmm, perhaps with a fantasy, is that possible? LOL!
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  Nov-3 5:41 am

I apologize for not having the energy to give you a proper c/p on this.  My brain is turning into mush :(  I like where this is coming from.  I think you did good at the love poem :)

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LOL. My brain is mush 99% of the time.
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